BC report card comment examples
[Student] demonstrates the expected writing processes by planning a focused piece, producing a draft, and revising to strengthen organisation and key details.
A next step is to revise the draft to clarify the main sequence of events and add or reorder one paragraph so the piece’s organisation is clearer.
These Grade 6 examples use BC’s proficiency scale: Emerging, Developing, Proficient and Extending. In Compass, you can use a built-in scale or set up your own.
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BC Grade 6 English Language Arts comment examples
ContentWriting processes
[Student] plans, drafts and revises with the audience in mind, choosing words and organising ideas to suit the purpose of the piece.
Next stepMake a short revision checklist for word choice, sentence order and paragraph breaks. Try it on one section of a draft.
[Student] plans a focused piece, writes a draft and revises it to strengthen the organisation and key details.
Next stepReread the draft. Move or add one paragraph so the ideas are easier to follow.
[Student] generates ideas and writes drafts, and is developing ways to revise and organise them.
Next stepChoose one draft and make two changes that improve the organisation or clarify the main idea.
[Student] identifies a topic and is beginning to write short drafts with some supporting details.
Next stepChoose one idea and sketch a beginning, middle and end before drafting.
ContentReading strategies
[Student] combines personal connections, inferences and mental images to explain layers of meaning in a text.
Next stepMark one connection, a sentence that supports an inference, and a sensory detail that helps explain that inference.
[Student] makes connections, uses context to infer meaning and pictures what is happening in a text.
Next stepAfter reading a page, note one personal connection and quote a sentence that supports an inference.
[Student] makes some connections and is beginning to use context clues and mental images to understand a text.
Next stepPause after a paragraph. Note one detail that creates a picture and one sentence that gives a clue to meaning.
[Student] recalls information stated in a text and is beginning to picture what it describes.
Next stepChoose a few sentences from a short paragraph and list three images or details they bring to mind.
ContentConventions
[Student] uses accurate spelling, varied sentence structures and precise punctuation to shape meaning in longer pieces.
Next stepEdit a paragraph for sentence variety and punctuation. Explain how each change affects clarity or emphasis.
[Student] writes sentences with appropriate punctuation and generally accurate spelling.
Next stepEdit a paragraph for spelling and punctuation, checking that each sentence expresses a complete thought.
[Student] uses correct spelling and punctuation in some sentences and is working on writing complete sentences more consistently.
Next stepEdit three sentences from a draft. Check spelling, punctuation and whether each sentence is complete.
[Student] is beginning to write complete sentences and use end punctuation.
Next stepRewrite three short phrases as sentences with a subject, a verb and end punctuation.
Start with what you taught
BC Grade 6 Math comment examples
ContentIntroduction to ratios
[Student] compares equivalent ratios using different representations and explains why the scaling factor works.
Next stepCreate and solve a multi-step scaling problem in three different ways. Explain each scaling choice.
[Student] finds equivalent ratios by scaling and explains the factor used.
Next stepMake a ratio table for several examples. For each one, explain which factor was used to scale both quantities.
[Student] identifies some equivalent ratios and can sometimes explain how the quantities scale when prompted.
Next stepComplete a ratio table for a single-step scaling problem. Label the factor used for each new row.
[Student] is beginning to use ratios to describe a simple comparison, such as the number of red counters compared with the number of blue counters.
Next stepMatch drawings or groups that show the same comparison. Explain how the counts are related.
ContentImproper fractions and mixed numbers
[Student] converts accurately between improper fractions and mixed numbers and explains how whole groups and remainders determine each form.
Next stepShow how to convert improper fractions with different denominators. Explain the whole groups and remainder in each example.
[Student] converts between improper fractions and mixed numbers and uses a model to show that both forms represent the same amount.
Next stepUse a diagram and a few sentences to explain how to convert an improper fraction to a mixed number.
[Student] converts between improper fractions and mixed numbers in straightforward examples, with occasional errors in the grouping or remainder.
Next stepGroup the pieces of a fraction model into wholes, then write the mixed number it shows.
[Student] is beginning to work with mixed numbers and can sometimes identify the whole-number part in a model.
Next stepUse a fraction model to separate the whole groups from the pieces left over. Write the mixed number it shows.
Curricular competencyExplain and justifyExplain and justify mathematical ideas and decisions
[Student] explains and justifies mathematical ideas with clear reasoning, precise terms and supporting examples.
Next stepJustify one solution method. State the method, show the steps and give an example that illustrates the reasoning.
[Student] explains mathematical decisions using relevant terms and gives reasons or examples to support them.
Next stepChoose a solved problem and explain each key decision using mathematical terms.
[Student] explains mathematical ideas in simple terms and may need prompts to give supporting reasons.
Next stepExplain a solution in two or three sentences and give one reason for choosing that method.
[Student] is beginning to explain mathematical decisions in words or drawings and may need help making the reasoning clear.
Next stepDraw a solution and write one sentence explaining a decision made along the way.
BC Grade 6 Science comment examples
ContentBody systemsExcretory, reproductive, hormonal and nervous systems
[Student] explains the roles and interactions of the excretory, reproductive, hormonal and nervous systems and connects those interactions to how the body maintains balance.
Next stepChoose one body function. Explain how two of these systems work together to support it, using scientific terms.
[Student] identifies the basic structures and primary functions of the excretory, reproductive, hormonal and nervous systems.
Next stepDescribe one structure in each system and how it supports the system’s main function.
[Student] recognises some structures of the excretory, reproductive, hormonal and nervous systems and describes at least one function for each.
Next stepLabel a diagram of each system. Write a sentence explaining what each labelled part does.
[Student] is beginning to identify basic parts of the excretory, reproductive, hormonal or nervous systems.
Next stepUse a classroom resource to identify three parts of one system and describe what each part does.
ContentOur solar systemThe position, motion, and components of our solar system in our galaxy
[Student] analyses how the positions and motions of planets and other components in our solar system relate to their apparent movement from Earth and to the solar system’s place in the galaxy.
Next stepBuild a model showing the positions and orbits of objects in the solar system. Use it to predict a change we can observe from Earth and explain the prediction.
[Student] describes the positions and motions of major solar system components and recognises the solar system’s location within the galaxy.
Next stepDraw and label the positions and movements of key objects in the solar system. Explain one feature of the diagram.
[Student] recognises major components of the solar system and can describe one aspect of their position or motion.
Next stepMatch each major component with a brief description of its motion or position and explain one example in one sentence.
[Student] names a few familiar parts of the solar system, such as the Sun and Earth.
Next stepUse a poster or model to locate the Sun, Earth and one other object. Share one fact about each.
Curricular competencyQuestions for scientific inquiryIdentify questions to answer or problems to solve through scientific inquiry
[Student] asks scientific questions that identify variables to investigate and explains what evidence would help answer each question.
Next stepDesign a clear investigation plan that identifies variables, predicts possible outcomes, and explains how the data collected would answer the question.
[Student] identifies clear scientific questions or problems that can be investigated and suggests appropriate ways to gather evidence.
Next stepChoose one question and outline a simple way to collect evidence that could help answer it.
[Student] suggests scientific questions about things that can be observed.
Next stepChoose a question and list the observations or measurements that could help answer it.
[Student] notices things in the world around them and is beginning to ask questions they could investigate.
Next stepWrite one question about something observed in class. Name two things to look for when investigating it.
BC Grade 6 Social Studies comment examples
ContentGlobalization and economic interdependence
[Student] explains globalization and economic interdependence by analysing complex connections between specific producers, consumers and trade relationships and discussing implications for communities.
Next stepTrace one product’s international connections. Explain how the choices of producers, consumers or traders affect particular communities.
[Student] describes globalization and economic interdependence by explaining how producers and consumers are linked and noting basic effects on communities.
Next stepGive one clear example of how a change in a trade connection can affect producers or consumers in another place.
[Student] identifies some ways globalization and economic interdependence connect people, goods and places and recognises a few effects of those connections.
Next stepChoose one connection between where a product is made and where it is used and describe one direct effect on a community.
[Student] is beginning to explain how the movement of people, goods or services connects places and can affect communities.
Next stepName a product made in one place and used in another. Explain one way it connects those places.
ContentUrbanization and migrationThe urbanization and migration of people
[Student] analyses the interaction of urbanization and migration by comparing causes and consequences across multiple places and time frames.
Next stepCompare two regions. Explain how the reasons people moved were connected to changes in each region’s cities.
[Student] identifies reasons people move to cities and describes common effects of migration on urban communities.
Next stepFind two examples of people moving to a city. Describe what prompted each move and how it affected the city.
[Student] recognises that migration and urbanization are linked and can name at least one cause of migration and one effect on a city.
Next stepMake a simple cause-and-effect chart showing one reason people migrate and one resulting change in a city.
[Student] is beginning to describe how people moving to a city can change how it looks or works.
Next stepFind and describe one simple example of something that changes in a city when more people move there.
Curricular competencySocial studies inquiryUse Social Studies inquiry processes and skills to ask questions; gather, interpret, and analyze ideas; and communicate findings and decisions
[Student] designs and conducts a sustained inquiry using focused questions and multiple sources to reach a well-reasoned conclusion and communicate findings.
Next stepRefine the inquiry question for clarity and add two different source types, noting how each source supports the conclusion.
[Student] uses social studies inquiry skills to ask focused questions, gather relevant information from a few sources, and communicate clear findings.
Next stepAdd one reliable source to the inquiry and revise the findings paragraph to include evidence from that source.
[Student] asks questions, gathers information and shares initial findings with some supporting details.
Next stepWrite one clear inquiry question and collect two sources that directly relate to that question.
[Student] asks simple questions and is beginning to find information that helps answer them.
Next stepWrite one clear question about a social studies topic and find one source that helps answer it.
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